Yeah. Here’s a page of people doing a whole lot of talking. At one point, Blake raises his arms excitedly while narrating past events. On the Exciteometer©, the events of this page are barely registering. Still, it’s an important part of storytelling and there are some panels that point out serious flaws in my rendering abilities… namely the foreshortening areas. I really need to work on that before attempting it again. This page ended up looking quite a bit differently than I originally anticipated because some panels just. did. not. work.
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